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    The Man With The Black Case

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    I was writing the first time I noticed him.

    He sat down at a nearby table with a drink in one hand and a shopping bag in the other. The way so many people do each and every day while I’m tapping away on the keyboard.

    Yet, he was different.

    There was something about the way he carried himself, the way he dressed, the confidence he possessed. It intrigued me. He intrigued me.

    I sat back in my seat and simply studied him. He was smartly dressed in all black—trousers, shirt, loose-fitting blazer, and shoes. If he had any hair, it wasn’t visible beneath the lines of his derby hat. The glasses he wore were rimmed in silver, the color of his eyes tough to determine from where I sat. His age hovered somewhere in the low to mid fifties.

    From the moment I saw him, I pegged him as a musician. I wasn’t entirely sure of the instrument but, if I had to guess (which I did), I assumed sax. Went with the image.

    Everything about him suggested he was the kind of guy who feels music in his soul. The kind who lives it, breathes it, sleeps it…

    Eventually I looked away, burying myself in my writing lest he look up and find me staring. I stole a few glances his way over the next thirty minutes, noting the contents of his shopping bag (music CDs), the way he poured over the lyrics, and the instrument case he pulled out from under the table and slung over his back before leaving (okay, so I’m a genius, what can I say?).

    I’ve never forgotten him. And I’m not sure why. Maybe it’s the writer thing. Maybe it’s because of the vivid character he projected without ever saying a word. Maybe I’m simply a nut. Who knows?

    Anyway, I saw him again last week, in a Starbucks about two miles away from the bookstore where I write. I was having a drink with my friend, Jodi, when he walked in. Same clothes. Same hat. Same instrument case slung over his back.

    Being the crappy poker player I am, Jodi noticed the way my eyes strayed to the door mid-conversation and remained there longer than they should, only moving as this guy walked to and from the counter.

    Busted!

    I explained (while still watching him) my first visual of the man months earlier and that I was convinced he was a musician before I ever saw the case on his back. We took a few guesses as to what he might play and then he was gone—out the door with his coffee, his I-pod, and the answers to my mental list of twenty-one questions.

    Saw him again this past weekend, walking along the road. Same clothes. Same hat. Same instrument case slung over his back. Suddenly he’s like that actor you’ve never seen before and then—WHAM!—he pops up in every movie you see for the next six months.

    Only now, I’m wondering…why? Why is he walking in an area you don’t normally see people walking? Why is he always wearing the same clothes?

    And, more importantly, is there really an instrument in his case?

    That, ladies and gentlemen, is what being a writer does to you. It makes you see instead of look. It makes you study instead of notice. It makes you concoct instead of think. And it turns something as innocent as an instrument case into…

    What?

    Have at it everyone. Be creative. Who is this guy? Where’s he going and why? And what is in his case?

    Hugs,
    ~Laura

    20 Responses to “The Man With The Black Case”

    1. The man you’re seeing is Death on holiday and it’s a horn he carries in that bag.

      But now that you’ve seen him, he’s about to play that horn for you.

      And it’s the last sound you’ll hear.

      by David Terrenoire on October 2nd, 2007 at 7:23 am

    2. I couldn’t possibly top David’s suggestion, so I’m not even going to try.

      by JennieB on October 2nd, 2007 at 7:28 am

    3. I’m with JennieB–there’s no topping David’s creepy answer!

      Do you think you’ll ever talk to the man in black? Or would that ruin everything?

      by Heather on October 2nd, 2007 at 7:48 am

    4. He’s an out of work jazz musician. Living on the streets - his music and his horn are the only things he cares about in the world and he’d rather starve than part with them. Some days he plays in the park for change, which he then spends on it on CDs. One morning, a wealthy music-lover dropped a grand into his case, and he used it to buy an iPod and more music. (He downloads music from the free computers at the library.) Don’t worry about him, though. His life is happy, and he’s doing what he loves. He doesn’t need money, he doesn’t need fame - as long as he has his music, he’s the richest man in the world.

      by B.E. Sanderson on October 2nd, 2007 at 7:56 am

    5. He’s an assistant manager in the music section at your local Borders, and your stalking is starting to creep him out. Stop following him, freak!

      by Theo Epstein on October 2nd, 2007 at 8:10 am

    6. I’ve gotten over my attack of inferiority now, and I’m going to give it a try.

      He’s a hired assassin known as the Virtuoso, because he makes his victims sing like nightingales. His instrument case contains his assortment of devious weapons, and he listens to opera on his i-pod while he works. I still like David’s answer better.

      by JennieB on October 2nd, 2007 at 9:20 am

    7. Jennie,

      It’s no accident that my blog is called A Dark Planet.

      by David Terrenoire on October 2nd, 2007 at 9:24 am

    8. Actually, the guy is Mitch Burns. He’s looking for Elise Jenkins. He’s trying to intimidate the author into giving up her whereabouts.

      Truth is stranger than fiction.

      by Will Bereswill on October 2nd, 2007 at 9:39 am

    9. First up, David you totally creeped me out. I mean willies and all when I read your reply early this morning. Then I went to go write and, guess what? He was there!!! I only looked at him long enough to push his age more towards mid to LATE fifties. But I actually heard horn music in my head when I walked in and saw him. Thanks, thanks a lot, David. :|

      JennieB, I think your scenario was awesome!!! I think you\’ve got an awesome novel idea there! Just remember me in your dedication.

      by Laura on October 2nd, 2007 at 11:57 am

    10. Nope, I won’t talk to him. I don’t think. Besides, after what David said, I’d be afraid to. LOL.

      B.E., I DO sense he’s relatively happy. And your version of his life was pretty cool.

      Theo, I actually wondered if he’s written some music blog somewhere about the girl with the black computer case…wondering what *I* have in mine.

      Will, Mitch is much younger. Taller.

      by Laura on October 2nd, 2007 at 12:00 pm

    11. Gave you the willies, did I?

      My work here is done.

      by David Terrenoire on October 2nd, 2007 at 12:26 pm

    12. He’s an internationally known hitman known as “The Doiby” owing to his bowler hat and pronounced accent.

      The case contains an assortment of knives, guns and ammunition. Oh, and his collection of kitten photos. He likes kittens. Especially in calendars.

      by Stephen Blackmoore on October 2nd, 2007 at 12:46 pm

    13. Get me a photo and I’ll do a photo match for you (just kidding, strictly against the rules). There’s some really cool facial recognition stuff on the market today though.

      by Mike on October 2nd, 2007 at 1:51 pm

    14. Stephen, the kitten fetish is just enough to add to the willies David caused. The psycho-type stories where the guy has a creepy interest/hobby are always the scariest IMO.

      Mike, what kind of stuff can you tell from a photo? Besides whether they’re wanted? I ran into a woman at a mystery conference in June who does handwriting analysis. I am happy to report that my oft-used mixture of print/cursive writing is, apparently, a bad sign. Hmmmm. Perhaps I shouldn’t be admitting this to a cop…

      by Laura on October 2nd, 2007 at 2:05 pm

    15. “First up, David you totally creeped me out. I mean willies and all when I read your reply early this morning.”

      “Gave you the willies, did I?”

      “Stephen, the kitten fetish is just enough to add to the willies David caused.”

      What’s all this “willies” stuff? When I was young, my parents and my friends called me Willy. I’m not sure I like the reference. :lol: :twisted:

      by Will Bereswill on October 2nd, 2007 at 3:12 pm

    16. Will, your parents gave you the Willy, not the willies.

      Whole different animal.

      My parents gave me the willies, but that’s another story.

      by David Terrenoire on October 2nd, 2007 at 4:02 pm

    17. “My parents gave me the willies, but that’s another story.”

      Ahhhh, David, there is indeed a story, if not a blog, there.

      by Laura on October 2nd, 2007 at 6:26 pm

    18. What I see at the department gives me the willies. As a person scared by 1984 I am suprisingly willing to implement “great new advances”. Facial recognition allows matching of video or still images with analyzed and databased images. Each face gets a score just like fingerprints. You just find pics with like enough scores. It is getting eerily good at ignoring beards, scars, color, and most methods of disguise.
      What is even more scary is the possiblities of where this “database” of photos could come from. I’ll leave that to conversation though.

      by Mike on October 2nd, 2007 at 9:32 pm

    19. Recurring characters are caused by the shortage of players in your imaginary life. He is both a herald and a turning point. Be careful of the case, it is empty but opening it could cause a feedback loop in your soul pulling you out of the reality/fiction bubble.

      by John on October 4th, 2007 at 5:43 am

    20. Interesting, John. That made me stop and think. Still is, as a matter of fact.

      by Laura on October 4th, 2007 at 10:54 am

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