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    CHARACTERS THAT NEVER EAT, DRINK OR SLEEP by Clare Langley-Hawthorne

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    Have you ever finished a book and thought – you know I don’t think any of the main characters ever ate, drank, slept or went to the bathroom…Or if they did, did it drive you crazy when all they ate was toast, all they drank was whiskey and they never slept unless it was to dream wild fantasies?

    As a writer of historical fiction, I can’t wait to describe every meal in detail. In Edwardian England, amongst the rich, food was an elaborate affair and a mark of status. You didn’t just eat, you dined in style. Which is perhaps why I get het up when I read a book in which the ordinary day to day lives of the characters are given short shrift.

    I don’t want to know that a character read a book; I want to know which book they read. I don’t want her to simply eat lunch; I want to know what she ate. I want every little detail to count – to provide an insight into who she (or she) is as a character. Okay I confess I may have spent far too much time ‘researching’ food for my Ursula Marlow books. I have deliberated for example on the type of tea she would be drinking at a particular time of day – would she be drinking Orange Pekoe or Irish Breakfast tea? Would she be a Lapsang Souchong drinker? And if she was, what would that say about her? Needless to say, I obviously drink way too much tea.

    As a reader I revel in the details or the most ordinary things and get thoroughly annoyed when it appears (to me) that the character never even needs basic sustenance. I was reading a series (I won’t name which) and for the first few books I don’t think the female protagonist and sleuth ever actually ate a full meal - and it drove me crazy. Of course the opposite is also true, how many books drop name brands as if they were somehow a substitute for description? I’m all for funny witty insights into the world of those who sling Prada bags over their shoulders – but sometimes it feels as if this is used as a writer’s crutch to avoid having to explain ‘the ordinary’.

    I think when creating a self contained world, all the minute details count in providing the richness that makes that world truly come to life. So go on, fess up – have you ever had the same experience as a reader and closed a book and thought – that character needed to get a life?

    And don’t forget to check out Clare’s own blog at Kill Zone.

    5 Responses to “CHARACTERS THAT NEVER EAT, DRINK OR SLEEP by Clare Langley-Hawthorne”

    1. I like the details. I read Hemingways A Moveable Feast because it was in the movie City of Angels. And I just saw the Jane Austin Book Club, where one of the characters reads a book that is discussed in one of the books they are reading.

      But I don’t know enough of the world of fashion to know what type of shoes they are wearing unless it’s a main designer like Jimmy Choo.

      We had a discussion about using bigs words for the sake of big words on one of my networks a month ago. As long as the detail doesn’t drag me out of the story to pull out a dictionary to figure out what the author is talking about, I’m fine with it.

      by Lynn on September 1st, 2008 at 7:24 am

    2. I don’t think I need to be along for the ride for every meal a character has, but yeah, I think without that stuff they don’t seem like real people. Less identifiable.

      Great post, Clare.

      by laura on September 1st, 2008 at 8:09 am

    3. Great job, Clare.

      Yeah, definitely the details matter. What someone eats or drinks can say a lot about them. On the other hand, unless it’s important to get across that someone eats nuked Mac & Cheese at every meal, I don’t need every detail every time. Same with the brand names. If the Prada bag says something about that particular character, then fine. If the fact that the bag is black and has lots of pockets says something, then fine. Details for the sake of filler isn’t fine, though. There has to be a point to it, and the fact that the author likes Prada isn’t good enough, I’m afraid.

      by JennieB on September 1st, 2008 at 8:16 am

    4. Amen, JennieB

      by laura on September 1st, 2008 at 10:26 am

    5. The devil is in the details so they say! I love it when an author transports me to the characters’ world and you can live, breath and eat with them. I agree you don’t need all the gory details but just enough to have the characters and setting come to life. Cheers from Queensland where it’s already Tuesday!

      by Clare Langley-Hawthorne on September 1st, 2008 at 6:09 pm

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