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    I Like The Made Up Stuff Best

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    As I may have mentioned in a previous blog, I was encouraged to teach a writing class at a local community college last spring. I crafted a six-week continuing education course on the basics of fiction writing (ideas, plot, characters, setting, etc.) and it took off. The first session I taught met its student cap, and the second session was within two students of doing the same.

    Yay me!

    Since the college liked what they saw, they encouraged me to offer an additional class—this one designed to explore various aspects of the creative writing process. And I, being the trained monkey that I am, did just that…

    Last Wednesday was the kick-off for my new class and it went really well. We focused on feature articles and the importance of finding just the right lead (not much different than a novel or short story). I was in my element thanks to my days as a working journalist and it showed. Seriously, you can stick me in front of a random subject and time me with a stopwatch. In less than five minutes I can nose out a feature article. And inside seven, I can tell you exactly what my lead will be.

    It’s a sickness, really.

    Tomorrow night, however, will be a different story as we take a look at something I’ve never tried to write…

    Memoirs.

    I’d insert a groan here but that would imply boredom. So I’ll stick with something a bit more accurate…

    :cry:

    Why the pathetic face, you ask?

    Well, I’ve been dabbling with various genres of fiction for more years than I can remember. And I’ve got the journalism thing down pretty well. But writing about myself?!?!?

    Uhhhh, I think I’ll pass.

    You see, just as fiction is an escape for readers, it’s also an escape for writers. At least this one anyway.

    For me, crafting a story is about putting the pieces of a puzzle together—a puzzle where I happily grab for each new piece in an attempt to complete the picture I’ve carried in my head for several weeks or months.

    The puzzle that is me, though, isn’t quite so fun. I may know who I am on most levels but I’m still actively assembling all the pieces that make up the whole picture. Some of the pieces are easy to place and manage to elicit a smile or a laugh. But some pieces can be almost painful to set down because they elicit something very different than a smile. One might bring fear, another pain. One might bring uncertainty, another tears.

    In fiction, you can always line through a portion of your outline or kill off a character if you find yourself in uncomfortable territory.

    In real life there’s no white-out or erasing. And while it can be mighty tempting to toss some of those rougher puzzle pieces back into the box, the picture that is me isn’t me without all the pieces. The good. The bad. And the ugly.

    One day, maybe, I’ll work some of those pieces into something I write and maybe it will end up being therapeutic. But for now, fiction is the puzzle I find less daunting. Which is why I’ll leave the actual memoir writing to my students tomorrow night as I stand nearby, ready to offer a slew of researched tips or to read excerpts from published works as necessary. :wink:

    Really. It’s either that or drag out the story of the evil poodle who snatched my lunch sack from my tiny hand—making off with my coveted meatloaf sandwich as I waited for the school bus one cold, snowy morning…

    So how about you? Ever try to write about something you’ve experienced—good, bad, or ugly? Have you shown it to anyone?

    And if you haven’t done either, tell us your own “evil poodle” memory. Surely everyone has one of those, right?

    Hugs,

    ~Laura

    13 Responses to “I Like The Made Up Stuff Best”

    1. Actually that kind of essay writing is where I’ve been the most successful, at least in being published. Taking a day of the life and making it a story that reads like fiction is fun.

      I took a creative non-fiction class a few years ago and wrote a story about a woman who lived in the early days of Idaho history. I got the idea from her grave in a small mountain town. I researched her life, mostly her husband’s life as he was one of the first mayors of Boise, the new capital. But a lot of it, her thoughts, her fears, I had to step into her shoes and imagine.

      My teacher loved it however she thought it wavered on the line between fiction and non too closely.

      by Lynn on November 4th, 2008 at 7:08 am

    2. I would LOVE to read your memoir.

      The novel I’m contemplating right now has a protagonist who’s a small town Southern lawyer. Naturally some of my own experiences and some of the “war stories” I’ve heard over the years are going to work their way into it. Which is, frankly, why I’m a little afraid of it. I may have to move after it gets published.

      by J.D. Rhoades on November 4th, 2008 at 8:23 am

    3. Oh, I wrote a short story about one of my humorous adventures in China. There were four of us from the U.S. visiting breweries and had been in China for about two weeks working 18 hour days, 7 days a week.

      The next day was to be a short day of travel in a rickety mini-bus, finally. The city we were going to was about 5 hours, but I noticed we would pass within an inch (on the map) of the 3rd largest waterfall in China.

      The look we got when we asked about swinging by there should have told us what we were in for. The journey to the waterfall (Hukou PuBu or kettlespout falls) was along the ridge of a mountain on a dirt road with thousands of people walking, biking, oxcarting, motorbiking, no guard rails dispite the 1,000 foot drop offs, bouncing, uh, well you get the picture. It took 9 hours to get there. One way. Oh did I mention that the road was never wide enough for 2 lanes and trucks carting coal from the mines used the road too.

      When we got there, staring across the dry river bed, the young lady they hired as a guide proudly announced in Mandarin, “Sorry, no water!”

      Actually she meant, “sorry, low water.” As it turns out, the main river channel had dug down into the bedrock and we couldn’t see it from our vantage point. It was spectacular.

      The ride back was every bit as eventful as the ride there. We left at 5 in the morning and got to our hotel in the next city at 3 the following morning, a 22 hour adveture. We had 2 hours to shower and shave before we got back on the bus to leave for our next brewery.

      by Wilfred Bereswill on November 4th, 2008 at 8:27 am

    4. Lynn, I think that’s the only way I could tackle a memoir at this point…if it was that of a fictional character. Your assignment sounds awesome!

      Dusty, you’ll have to share some of those war stories at Love is Murder in Feb. I can imagine you’ve got some doozies.

      Will, you go above and beyond for a beer, don’t you? :mrgreen:

      by laura on November 4th, 2008 at 9:32 am

    5. I’m with you on the memoir attraction: There is none.

      You know, I think a lot of people confuse non-fiction, or factual writing, with writing that illuminates truth.

      In the same stroke, they assume that fiction is a lie.

      Every non-fic piece, even something we write about ourselves, is written with a purpose, the story told at a slant. Some facts are overlooked to dull an edge, others tossed in to sharpen a point.

      Happens by accident, happens by design.

      Is a story factual even when it’s shaded?

      Sure.

      Does it honestly render the author or event?

      Eh, maybe.

      In fiction, you’re writing with intent, but you’re exploring truth unfettered by fact. You’re shaping a reality. You’re using your thoughts, feelings, fears and desires to create characters that breathe and bleed. And you’re dropping them into a universe that ticks to the winding of its own clock–a clock that you built, you set. That marks time as you see it.

      The very fabric of a story is woven from who and what we are, born of events and emotions hatched inside our own little hearts and heads.

      You’re never more naked than when you’re standing in front of someone, and they’ve just read your book.

      Want to know ABOUT a person? Read their memoir.

      Want to know the PERSON who wrote the memoir? Read their fiction.

      Cool blog topic, Laura! Wish I was in your class…

      by Joe on November 4th, 2008 at 9:50 am

    6. Also, I have a VERY bad memory involving an evil poodle skirt.

      Tale better left untold.

      by Joe on November 4th, 2008 at 9:53 am

    7. Joe, I couldn’t agree more. My fiction got better as I experienced more “stuff” in life…not so much the incidents themselves (some of that was years ago) but to examine the feelings/passions/disappointments that stemmed from them. The more in touch I got with my feelings, the deeper my writing became. I never used anything real but the feelings themselves bettered my writing.

      Great comment!

      An evil poodle skirt memory? Oh, you’ve soooo got to tell that one!!!!

      by laura on November 4th, 2008 at 9:59 am

    8. I go all out for beer until they tell me I can’t.

      by Wilfred Bereswill on November 4th, 2008 at 10:07 am

    9. If anyone is interested in my memoir about China, I posted it, with pictures.

      http://wbereswill.com/wordpress/

      by Wilfred Bereswill on November 4th, 2008 at 10:56 am

    10. LOL on the evil poodle. I love to read memoirs, but write one? No thanks! Now if I could make up a not-so-boring life…

      by heather on November 4th, 2008 at 4:25 pm

    11. I disagree with whatever Heather wrote.

      by Theo Epstein on November 4th, 2008 at 10:05 pm

    12. A few people will have to die before I can write my memoir! I started NaNoWriMo this month. I’mm actually writing a memoir. It is a true account of Macy’s (our dog) life from about 12weeks until the present. So far in Iowa, Macy has experienced snow coming down sideways, 59 mile an hour wind gusts and a pond full of honking geese! (I discovered that punching something (a bag) is truly the best medicine!)

      Where would you submitt a piece about a personal experience (tragic) in the hopes that it won’t happen to some other young girl (I was at the time).

      Take care,
      Sharon

      by sharon on November 5th, 2008 at 3:26 am

    13. I actually wrote one for a couple of members of my high school class, humorously titled “For all the girls I loved….” and dealing specifically with relationships over the years - but I don’t know anyone outside those few that would find it interesting. I do have an active blog, but it is hardly memoir material, more like whatever itch is scratching me at any given moment. I also journal, but that’s because my therapist said I should - and he also said shouldn’t show it to anyone.

      Maybe after I retire - if by that time I can still reme

      by Bob on November 5th, 2008 at 10:39 am

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